New Ending!

The ending to the Pit and The Pendulum was too fast and ended the story too abrubtly. This is my ending to add a little spice. As the firey walls were closing in, there were only two ways to go; down the pit to who knows what or be squished in the firey walls. Right at the last moment I decide to jump down the pit to my destiny. It is not a far jump and i land in a shallow water up to my shins. Once I remain my balance and look around there is little light except for a sun beam coming from somewhere. I look around and I see that there are many other guys that had the same idea as me. But they havent survived, and died one way or another. I am now looking at my death.